haiku

Just some poems i came up with for English class. Let me know if you like them, pick a favorite, if you want.Or let me know if something needs fixed.

Alarm
A darkened spring night
thunder shivers throughout...
a shocking distraction


Awakening
Startled from rest
War's screeching sounds lurk---
felines in the night.


Remembering
Droning cars aloft
reminders of thy hidden home,
beneath the concrete bridge.


Peace
Scattered above
glimpses of luminescence
frosted starry night


Autumn
The delicate scent
a heavenly smell,
spices of pumpkin.


Insomnia
Restlessly tossing,
Unable to sleep soundly...
humid nights remain.


A Loss
Flies torture minds
as they thoughtlessly soar,
onto decaying dreams


Temptation
Puddles await
to be senselessly stepped in---
springtime rain


Battles Lost
A dark alley
with the stench of decay---
a child has fallen


Watching
Above, there are stars
fateful death awaiting...
under a solemn moon.

In that last one, "solemn" or "somber"?
thanks :)